Sunday, September 16, 2007

Fundamental Requirements in Building Physical Theories

An Original Research Essay

Frank Luger headshot by Frank Luger

As mentioned in some of my previous essays the philosophy of science requires that any physical theory worth its salt must be built around at least potential observability and must obey the reduction principle, i.e. be capable of being shown to rest on established theories. These are logical requirements based on the consistency of Nature. However, if one approaches theory building in physics from the physical rather than the philosophical side, there are some other principles to obey; and these principles are sine qua nonrequirements of proper physical theories, in the sense of transcending any particular theory. Collectively, they may be called symmetry and conservation laws; and they directly rest upon invariances, which are independent of time and space and which are also based on the consistency of Nature. The difference is that while the philo-sophical requirements are a priori, that is, "dic-tated" by induction and synthesis; the physical requirements are a posteriori, that is, dictated by deduction and analysis of actual data. For the present heuristic purposes, let us concentrate on the latter kinds1.

Symmetry in Nature has been dealt with by some very famous authors2and likewise, conservation lawshave also been extensively discussed3. Instrumentalism and its extreme form, solipsism, would proclaim that as "beauty is in the eye of the beholder," symmetry is a figment of human imagination, based on the basic human need for aesthetic experiences. Scientific realism in general, and quantum realism in particular, on the other hand, would maintain that symmetry is inherentin Nature; and this whole disagreement in philosophical perspectives between instrumentalism and realism represents, in fact, the difference between epistemicand onticviewpoints and orientation emphases. While there are certain difficulties with both vantage points, especially in their extreme forms, most of the data from recent research in physics seems to tilt the balance in favor of quantum realism and against instrumentalism, especially in its earlier ("Copenhagen School") form4. Let's now briefly review first the theory of the basic symmetry and conservation laws, as they represent broad generalizations whereby physical theories may transcend time and space; and then, list the most important principles and laws.

Based on concepts from classical geometry, the word symmetryimplies divisibility into two or more even parts of any regular shape in 1, 2, or 3 dimensional ordinary (Euclidean) space. However, in physics, 'symmetry' has a more precise, albeit more general meaning than in geometry. Reversible balance is implied, that is, something has a particular type of symmetry if a specific operation is performed on it, yet it remains essentially unchanged. For example, if two sides of a symmetrical figure can be interchanged, the figure itself remains basically invariant. A triangle may be moved any distance, if there is neither rotation nor expansion-contraction involved, then the triangle remains symmetrical under the operation of translation in space. This means little in (projective) geometry, but in actual physical situations, it can be far from trivial. If we imagine an initially symmetrical shape with some weight attached to it as being moved to a different gravitational field, symmetry will not be conserved. Yet, the basic laws of physics are supposed to be independent from locations in space. And they are. What may be different are those aspects which are variable, but their interrelationships do not change. Symmetry will be conserved not relative to a fixed observer, but relative to the form in which the basic laws are expressed -- i.e. their mathematical descriptions.

The inevitable conclusion is that it is the mathematical expressions of physical laws which are responsible for ensuring that the form of the basic laws of physics is symmetrical under the operation of translation in space. For example, the law of conservation of momentum is a mathematical consequence of the fact that the basic laws have this property of assuming the same form at all points in space. The conservation law is a consequence of the symmetry principle, and there is reason to believe that the symmetry principle is more fundamental than the detailed form of the conservation law. A general theory, thanks to its mathematical armoury in which tensor analysis and differentiable manifolds assume great importance, is able to formulate basic equations which have the property of assuming the same form at all points in space.

Therefore, when "indulging" in theory building, the theoretical physicist is well advised to try to formulate his basic laws so that they become and remain symmetrical under any and all fundamental transformation. Fortunately, there are several well-known and well-established guidelines; and these are what we may subsume under the general heading of symmetry principles and conservation laws. It is important to keep in mind that conservation laws are mathematical consequences of various symmetries, thus as long as the theorist ensures that his formulations do not violate basic principles of symmetry, he stands a good chance of being subsequently able to deduce the appropriate conservation laws, and prove, at least to the satisfaction of the requirements of mathematical logic, the soundness of his conceptualizations. By contrast, failure to observe this guideline may result in heaps of impressive-looking pseudoscientific rubbish, as for example in various airy grandiose schemes and trendy New Age fads and hasty oversimplifications ad nauseam5. While it is true that a few symmetry principles and conservation laws are still controversial, and it is not always clear which conservation law is necessarily a (mathematical) consequence of which symmetry principle; the fact is that most of the relationships are well established, and repeated mathematical testing of various new theoretical models is not only always helpful but perhaps even mandatoryas well. That is, before making predictions and deducing testable hypotheses and subjecting them to observations and experiments, it is best to have played the devil's advocate and trying as hard as one can, to make a "liar" of oneself. This grueling task will pay grateful dividends later, by saving the theorist from self-discreditation and its inevitable consequence, death by ridicule.

Following Einstein and his postulates of Special Relativity, we accept that the form of the basic laws of physics is the same at all points in space. This is called symmetry under translation in space, and (mathematically) it leads to the law of conservation of linear momentum. This is one of the most fundamental principles of modern physics. Next, in a similar vein, we also accept that the basic laws of physics describing a system apply in the same form under fixed angle rotations — i.e. the laws have the same form in all direction. We may call this the principle of symmetry under rotation in space, and again, (mathematically) it gives rise to the law of conservation of angular momentum. Now comes time, i.e. that the form of the basic laws of physics does not change with the passage of time. Once a fundamental invariance is successfully identified, it can be assumed with great confidence that what was the case many millions of years ago will still be the case indefinitely into the future. This principle is called symmetry under translation in time, and (mathematically) it yields the law of conservation of energy (also known as the First Law of Thermodynamics). However, the next principle, that of symmetry under reversal of timeis somewhat controversial, because although it is theoretically possible, it is practically never observed. The principle leads to the great Second Law of Thermodynamics, through a series of steps which would be a bit too technical for the present purposes. Symmetry under time reversal maintains that a time reversal process can occur, but it does not say that it does occur or that it ever will occur. This is a rather subtle, and thus a much misunderstood and disputed point, as discussed in my paper "Conceptual Skepticism in Irreversible Energetics", cited in footnote No.1 (14) above. It is precisely because symmetry under time reversal is never observed in practice, but the opposite, i.e. asymmetry and irreversibility are always observed, that the Second Law of Thermodynamics is still one of the most controversial of the basic laws of physics. Disregarding mathematics for the moment, how theoretical reversibility gives rise to practical irreversibility in Nature remains somewhat nebulous. It is possible that irreversibility is a special case of reversibility due to a hitherto unexplained intervening construct or variable, rather than the other way around. Future research will tell, we hope.

Still another consequence of Einstein's Special Relativity theory is that the basic laws of physics have the same form for all observers, regardless of the observers' motions. In other words, the basic laws have the same form in all inertial frames of reference, and thus do not depend on the velocity or momentum of the observer. In Einstein's General Theory of Relativity, which is not as well substantiated as the Special Theory, the basic laws are assumed to have the same form for all observers, no matter how complicated their motions might be. Altogether, this is the principle of relativistic symmetry.

Turning to microphysics, it must be considered that fundamental particles have no individual differences in the sense of "identities", i.e. if we interchange two particles of the same class or category (vide infra), such action does not influence the physical process as a whole. This indistinguishability of similar particles gives rise to the principle of symmetry under interchange of similar particles. An electron is no different from any other electron. Furthermore, if negative charge cancels an equal amount of positive charge, then there is no known physical process which can change the net amount of electric charge. This is known as the law of conservation of electric charge, and it is thought to be a (mathematical) consequence of certain symmetry properties of the quantum mechanical wave function psy (Ψ). Similarly, if a particle cancels its antiparticle, there is no known physical process which changes the net number of leptons (light particles); and this is known as the law of conservation of leptons, although an underlying symmetry principle has not been unequivocally established. In a like vein, also in particle-antiparticle cancellations, the net number of baryons (heavy particles) remains the same; this is the law of conservation of baryons, and similarly to leptons, no underlying symmetry principle has been properly established. It is noteworthy, that while there are conservation laws for fermions, there are no such laws for bosons, photons, pions, kaons, etas, and gravitons.

There are also imperfect symmetries, which may or may not be intrinsic to Nature. That is, it is possible that Nature is constructed according to a scheme of partial or imperfect symmetry, whereby irreversibility would be the rule and reversibility the exception. It is more probable, however, that things are the other way around (reversibility is the rule and irreversibility is the exception), and the fault lies within our own machinery, as mentioned in some of my other writings (see footnotes). One such imperfect symmetry is charge independence. There is a principle of symmetry of isotopic spin, whose (mathematical) correspondent is a law of conservation of isotopic spin. This law applies to strong nuclear interactions, but is broken by electromagnetic and weak interactions. Also, there are then processes which involve what have come to be called the strange particles; and to each of them an integral number had been assigned, known as its strangeness. The law of conservation of strangeness is also an imperfect symmetry, inasmuch as strangeness is conserved in strong interactions, but not in weak interactions. However, the very particle-antiparticle symmetry turns out to be a broken or imperfect symmetry, because all weak interactions violate it; and there is no fully satisfactory explanation for this imperfect charge conjugation.

The principle of mirror symmetry maintains that for every known physical process there is another possible process which is identical with the mirror image of the first. Yet, this can also be a broken or imperfect symmetry, depending on "handedness" — inasmuch as one cannot put a left-hand glove on the right hand, no matter how much one glove may seem like the mirror image of the other. Mirror symmetry can be expressed mathematically in terms of a quantity called parity and there is a corresponding law of conservation of parity. However, weak interactions do not conserve parity, although all other types of interactions do. One example is that although the neutrino and the antineutrino are mirror images of one another, the neutrino is like a left-hand glove and the antineutrino is like a right-hand glove. Generally speaking, all weak interactions violate the symmetry principle of mirror reflection. All weak interactions violate the symmetry principle of particle-antiparticle interchange. All interactions, including weak interactions, are symmetrical under the combined operation of mirror reflection plus particle-antiparticle interchange6.

Despite such "violations" and "broken symmetries", when the universal "big" picture is contemplated, symmetries outweigh asymmetries sufficiently to restore one's faith in the esthetic beauty and efficient elegance of Nature. As shown by recent advances in cosmology7, although asymmetries are cosmological in origin, they somehow seem to fit integrally into the overall scheme of things, and thus represent no violations of any great law, but rather, they help to give rise to them and to maintain them in a sort of dynamic equilibrium, however unbalanced certain parts of the whole seem to be from time to time or even all the time. Therefore, it seems reasonable to conclude, that the more we come to understand the fundamental nature and ways of the Universe, the more we may become enchanted by its intrinsic beauty and harmony on the grandest as well as the minutest scales, whereby we may even catch an occasional glimpse of Eternity.


1 The philosophical requirements of potential observatibility and the reduction principle will be dealt with in another essay, which will examine the connection between the philosophy of quantum mechanics and that of modern interactional psychology, more or less within the framework of General Systems Theory.

2 e.g. Weyl, H. Symmetry, Princeton University Press, 1952; Wigner, E.P.: The unreasonable effectiveness of mathematics in the natural sciences, in Symmetries and Reflections, Scientific Essays of E.P. Wigner, Bloomington: Indiana University Press, 1978; Ziman, J.: Reliable Knowledge, An Explanation of the Grounds for Belief in Science, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1978; etc.

3 e.g. Feynman, R.: The Character of Physical Laws, Cambridge, Mass.: The M.I.T. Press, 1965; Jammer, M.: The Philosophy of Quantum Mechanics, New York: Wiley, 1974; Weisskopf, V.F.: Knowledge and Wonder, Cambridge, Mass.: The M.I.T. Press, 1979; Ziman, J.: op. cit.; etc.

4 e.g.: Cook, Sir A.: The Observational Foundations of Physics, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1994; d'Espagnat, B.: Reality and the Physicist, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1989; Hawking, S.W.: A Brief History of Time, New York: Bantam, 1988; Peierls, R.: More Surprises in Theoretical Physics, Princeton, N.J.: Princeton University Press, 1991; Rohrlich, F.: From Paradox to Reality: Our Basic Concepts of the Physical World, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1989; Weinberg, S.: The Quantum Theory of Fields, Vols. I-III, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1995, 1996, 2000; etc.

5 e.g. Capra, F.: The Tao of Physics, New York: Bantam, 1975; LaViolette, P.A.: Beyond the Big Bang: Ancient Myth and the Science of Continuous Creation, Rochester, Vt.: Park Street Press, 1995; Zukav, G.: The Dancing Wu-Li Masters: An Overview of the New Physics, New York: Bantam, 1980; etc.

6 e.g. Blohintsev, D.I. Questions of Principle in Quantum Mechanics and Measure Theory in Quantum Mechanics, Moscow: Science, 1981; Eisberg, R. & Resnick, R.: Quantum Physics of Atoms, Molecules, Solids, Nuclei, and Particles, , 2nd ed., New York: Wiley, 1985; Holland, P.R.: The Quantum Theory of Motion, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1993; Gómez, C., Ruiz-Altaba, M., & Sierra, G.: Quantum Groups in Two-Dimensional Physics, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1996; McQuarrie, D.A.: Quantum Chemistry, Mill Valley, Calif.: University Science Books, 1983; etc.

7 e.g. Barrow, J.D.: The Origin of the Universe, New York: Basic Books, 1994; Binney, J. & Tremaine, S.: Galactic Dynamics, Princeton, N.J.: Princeton Astrophysics Series, 1987; Hawking, S.W.: op. cit., 1988; Hawking, S.W.: Black Holes and Baby Universes, New York; Bantam, 1993; Hawking, S.W. & Penrose, R.: The Nature of Space and Time, Princeton, N.J.: Princeton University Press, 1996; Kaufmann III, W. J.: Relativity and Cosmology, 2nd ed., New York: Harper & Row, 1985; Penrose, R. & Rindler, W.: Spinors and Space-Time, Vol.II: Spinor and Twistor Methods in Space-Time Geometry, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1993; Rindler, W.: Essential Relativity: Special, General, and Cosmological, New York: McGraw-Hill, 1977; Wald, R.: Space, Time, and Gravity, Chicago Press, 1977.

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Tuesday, September 11, 2007

Writing About Drawing

Charmaine Frost headshot by Charmaine Frost

draw out  drawing room  draw
up  draw a blank  draw in
drawn and quartered  drawback
beat to the draw  draw ahead
drawing card  drawstring
draw his last breath  draw poker
draw out  draw a blank  draw in
drawing table  draw poker
draw in  drawn and quartered
draw up  draw his last breath
last breath beat to the draw drawing
roomdrawnandquartereddrawup
beattothedrawdrawingcarddraw
drawstringdrawhislastbreathdra...
drawing

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Friday, September 07, 2007

Games

Fred Vaughan headshot by Fred Vaughan

I'm tired of Old;
Let's quit this game.
Let's play something else
Like Doctor.

The author and patient at home
The author and patient at home.

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Thursday, September 06, 2007

Fragments

Richard May headshot by Richard May

Nothingness dances dreams of the dead,
soul-eyed shadows of devouring moon.
Star mind feasts upon Orphean strains,
alchemical food of Endless sun.

May-Tzu

crow moon snow

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Wednesday, September 05, 2007

"As I Walked Out One Evening"

A Walk

Ron Penner headshot by Ron Penner

W. H. Auden
W. H. Auden

This poem, by Wystan Hugh Auden I have known for years and always considered it to be one of the most remarkable of poems, written in the English language in the twentieth century. There were always images in it that eluded me as to their origin, and still do, but the magic, the word magic of the poem was such that this did not matter. They all seemed right, even as I could not say why and this made the poem even more magical and wondrous. Then one insomniac night in January, I determined to wrestle with this poem, to analyze it as far as possible and extract its deeper meaning and the source of its unforgettable appeal. But I misremembered much of it, so I reread it the next morning and began refining a coherent interpretation that could do some measure of justice to this great work. The interpretation lies not on the surface and would not be evident, I believe, to a casual reader of the poem, and I thought that perhaps this type of analysis might be of some interest. I recall a television program on Auden long ago in which he walked out of his house into his Bentley and drove off, all the while nonchalantly reciting this poem. I thought, he could have chosen from among scores of his poems for this charade, but he chose this one. Ergo, one of the greatest poets of the century chose this poem as possibly his best work. For future reference, the poem is included in full on the next page.

Several assumptions need to be made. There may be several levels of interpretation of a poem; to seek the deepest one is, I would argue, to also seek the most internally consistent, and this latter has been my aim. I take it for granted that the poem means what its author intended. Deconstructing a poem or any work of literature is akin to an attempt to cure a patient by an operation to rearrange bodily organs. The patient dies! And if the creators take this seriously, nothing but trivia remains. I assume that all imagery in the poem ultimately relates to evolving mental and spiritual states that progress from a wild, headless Romanticism to a deep understanding and acceptance of Reality with Time serving metaphorically as a mediator. And if this poem is about changing inner realities, the lover and lovers of the poem must arise from that inner reality and not be independent of it. Whether this poem is autobiographical in nature or an Everyman poem, I do not know. I suspect that it is neither, but refers to the Artistic Age in which Auden fully participated, ending with the sobering and somber realities and realizations of World War II. In support of this as addressing his own between-the-wars' generation one can quote a famous, earlier concluding stanza from "September 1, 1939." (See previous page.) These lines suggest, not so much a refusal to accept reality as an isolation from reality, although both I believe are present, and thus make the "lover's song"---the poem is actually titled "Song: As I Walked Out One Evening"---more understandable. For lovers, in the deepest moments of their romance, can be almost oblivious to all else the is going on around them. This should then be considered, I believe, as transferred to the generation between the wars, the generation which slept through history, with all the tragedy that that ultimately entailed. Just as Romeo and Juliet seemed perfectly oblivious to the problems that they were causing their respective families and the entire city of Verona.

As I Walked One Evening

by W. H. Auden

As I walked out one evening,
     Walking down Bristol Street,
The crowds upon the pavement
     Were fields of harvest wheat.

And down by the brimming river
     I heard a lover sing
Under the arch of the railway
     "Love has no ending.

I'll love you, dear, I'll love you
     Till China and Africa meet
And the river jumps over the mountain
     And salmon sing in the street.

I'll love you till the ocean
     Is folded and hung up to dry
And the seven stars go squawking
     Like geese about the sky.

The years shall run like rabbits
     For in my arms I hold
The Flower of the Ages
     And the first love of the World."

But all the clocks in the city
     Began to whirr and chime:
"O let not Time deceive you,
     You cannot conquer Time."

In the burrows of the Nightmare
     Where Justice naked is,
Time watches from the shadow
     And coughs when you would kiss.

In headaches and in worry
     Vaguely life leaks away,
And Time will have his fancy
     To-morrow or today.

Into many a green valley
     Drifts the appalling snow;
Time breaks the threaded dances
     And the diver's brilliant bow.

The glacier knocks in the cupboard,
     The desert sighs in the bed,
And the crack in the tea-cup opens
     A lane to the land of the dead.

Where the beggars raffle the banknotes
     And the Giant is enchanting to Jack,
And the Lily-white boy is a Roarer
     And Jill goes down on her back.

O plunge your hands in water,
     Plunge them in up to the wrist;
Stare, stare in the basin
     And wonder what you've missed.

O look, look in the mirror,
     O look in your distress;
Life remains a blessing
     Although you cannot bless.

O stand, stand at the window
     As the tears scald and start;
You shall love your crooked neighbour
     With your crooked heart."

It was late, late in the evening,
     The lovers they were gone;
The clocks had ceased their chiming
     And the deep river ran on.


September 1, 1939

by W. H. Auden

Faces along the bar
     Cling to the average day:
The lights must never go out,
     The music must always play,
All the conventions conspire
     To make this fort assume
The furniture of home;
     Lest we should see where we are,
Lost in a haunted wood,
     Children afraid of the night
Who have never been happy or good.

There are two long quotations in the poem of about equal length, but they are totally different. The first, with a headlong romanticism, treats Reality as whatever you choose or want it to be; the second is a painful coming to terms with Reality and with the wisdom that is thereby gained. The first is symbolized by the brimming river, about to overflow its banks and leave havoc and destruction in its wake and the deep river, no longer a threat but useful to all Mankind. And the second quotation not only delineates painful aspects of Reality which must be accepted, but delineates three stages of spiritual regeneration necessary for the deep wisdom of the deep river to "flow on." Finally, that the poem seems to encapsulate the experiences of a lifetime, yet only a few moments had passed - "the clocks had ceased their chiming" - and that this sense, does or should add an element of depth to the poem which lifts it far beyond the ordinary. Auden was a meteor of his generation, a satirical and despairing poet of his Age who yet wrote the conclusion of "In Memory of W. B. Yeats."

With the farming of a verse
     Make a vineyard of the curse,
Sing of human unsuccess
     In a rapture of distress;

In the deserts of the heart
     Let the healing fountain start,
In the prison of his days
     Teach the free man how to praise."

If this poem is, to some extent, autobiographical, it traces that evolution. Now to a brief review and comment upon some of the lines of the poem. The poem begins with the most arresting and extraordinary image; the prosaic Bristol Street upon which were a crowd that was "a field of harvest wheat." How does that opening image serve the poem as a whole? First, it serves to signal to the reader that this is no ordinary poem. But the image stands alone, and it is the only one that can definitely be ascribed to the one who is experiencing this journey of the spirit, everything else could be ascribed to the lover and "all the clocks in the city" or to Time itself. So what does it portend? This is a hallucination of a kind that might be induced by a rare and benign LSD trip. This is intended to herald that the first quote deals with Unreality and the effort of the mind to create its own Reality and the destructive consequences of that, no matter how lovely they may appear. The lover's 'song' knows no limits and creates an impossible Universe and Time thunders its rebuke, despite the nobility of his intentions. Those two lines: "But all the clocks in the city began to whirr and chime:" First, prosaically, one cannot possibly hear "all the clocks in the city" and this poem is experiential. This indicates both an illusory state of mind and a heightened sense of perception. "Whirr and chime?" Whirr signifying disorder, chime signifying order in three words and one perception seems to presage a divided Mind which perceives opposites as a whole, but without synthesis.

Suddenly everything changes, very abruptly. That thundering proclamation: "O let not Time deceive you, You cannot conquer Time." intervenes and severs the poem into two parts. I remember a Shakespearean scholar once saying that whenever you see, in reading, time capitalized by Shakespeare, you should pause and reflect, for he always then has something profound to impart. I imagine Auden remembering that when he wrote these lines. Yet here time is capitalized not once, but four times in the short space of a few lines. Is this an excess of profundity? profundity running amok? profundity on holiday? I think not, for Time itself has its lessons to teach and part of coming to terms with Reality, in the first part of the second quotation is coming to terms with time. And when you capitalize time, you are not referring to quotidian time, but to eternal time or something akin to it. Thus in this very subtle way he introduces questions of the Ultimate, for I imagine that the last thing Auden wanted to be considered was another Eliot.

Then follow three stanzas of negative aspects of Reality that this life must come to terms with. The first is disillusionment, the second dissipation, and lastly sorrow and loss. Consider the second and its second line, "Vaguely life leaks away."

"The sound must echo of the sense" wrote Pope, and this line magnificently fulfills that dictum through the velocity of language, i. e., 'vaguely life leeeeaks awway.' The line slows to an appropriate crawl. And, "You cannot conquer Time." and "Time will have its fancy..." There are many realities, many events you cannot control, unlike your attempts to control it through you own recreation of it. I must pause to note those marvelously evocative two lines:

"Into many a green valley drifts the appalling snow."(Let them stand without comment.) And Time even brings to an end Siva's many dances. The next two stanzas introduce real Evil and dread. The second stanza is curious but very effective, for it introduces evil from English nursery rhymes, thus evil hiding under a thin veneer of innocence, a sugarcoated evil which makes it all the more nightmarish.

After all of these negative aspects of reality that must be accepted for growth to occur comes tasks for spiritual regeneration. In three brief stanzas, three stages of such a regenerative process are limned. The first involves cleansing, the second unflinching self-examination, the third a deep measure of regret. Consider how strongly the second line of both the first and second stanzas reinforces the first lines. "O plunge your hands in water, Plunge them up to the wrist." "O look, look in the mirror, O look in your distress."

Then comes that lofty yet down to earth denouement, all so unexpected: "You shall love your crooked neighbour with your crooked heart." By twice using the adjective 'crooked' Auden escapes from any charge of didacticism or pious moralizing and ends the second quotation on Reality with an uncompromising adjective, twice given. But as with any such valid moral injunction, it extends beyond itself to alter whatever it touches, thus these two denouement lines can be read as branching out to all of the ethical life of Man.

The final stanza says more, I believe, than any of the others. Each line has a significant message to tell and each integrates with the rest of the poem. "It was late, late in the evening."

It was late in life when this evolution or series of transformations began and ultimately were realized. Perhaps it is always late, or seems so. "The lovers they were gone:"

This is the most complex line to interpret, and I do not want the interpretation to seem forced, so I would only ask that it be considered only in the light of all the rest. I wrote at the beginning that this was a poem of only a unitary consciousness, that the images were ultimately intended to indicate mental and spiritual states and stages of growth and evolution. If this be so, then there can be no outside voices, they all come from within one consciousness. Then, the lover who speaks the first quote is part of that unitary consciousness. But lovers?! Yes, for this symbolizes or indicates a divided self, the divided self of the first part of the poem. The reception of that speech is divided from the speech itself. That self was badly fractured and a significant part of the growth and healing of the second part of the poem, though unstated, was the unification of that self. But the "lovers... were gone." 'Gone' has a finality to it meant to imply that that aspect of the self had not just been transformed, it had died. "The clocks had ceases their chiming." How long does it take clocks to chime? What seemed like half a lifetime had passed in only a few moments. "And the deep river ran on." The river of life which this represents, was now a very different river from the brimming river of the first part of the poem. Now it was on an altogether different plane, secure within its banks, its depth signifying all the hard won wisdom that had been gained, a benefit and no longer a threat to the plain, flowing securely on to eventually join the ocean. But all that the ocean implies lies beyond the scope of this poem, for it is not spoken of, therefore neither shall I speak of it.

Thus the central problem of this poem is how to account for the sudden need for repentance and atonement, for regeneration and reform which so dramatically and suddenly divides this poem into two parts. Some might say that I have been grasping at straws. I would reply that I have been grasping, but only for any clues and interpretations from the poem that might provide a holistic and well-rounded rationale for those needs.

Ron Penner and Bob Seitz
The author and his friend Bob Seitz converse

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